![]() ![]() ![]() But that is really all it amounted to - TRYING to make you feel, but not actually succeeding. This book tried SO hard to make you feel how high the stakes were. Everything happened way too quickly and way too easily. ![]() In at least one case, the dialogue actually ended up being spoken by a THIRD character in the scene who hadn't even been mentioned (so you naturally had been under the assumption it was one of the two people in the same paragraph who was doing the speaking).ģ. Several times in the book, they described two people doing an action, and then had a line of dialogue in the same paragraph without making it clear which of the two was saying that dialogue. ![]() Why did it keep changing? Sometimes, even within a few sentences, the school would go from being "Kogakkan" to "Kogakkon". The spelling for the school name kept changing. Some of the things that bothered me, in no particular order:ġ. But by the last third of it.dear goodness. Up until the last part of the book, I thought I would probably give this three stars since I neither hated nor loved it. It started off so strong, but at some point just went off the rails. Just finished this and.I honestly don't know what to think. ![]()
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